First books are hard. You’re figuring out everything on your own, your only help usually being other unpublished writers and/or readers untrained in the editorial arts. First graphic novels are even harder, because not only do you have to figure out the story elements, you also have to master the craft of visual, sequential storytelling.

So a first graphic novel by a solo writer/artist is a herculean labor, and for that reason it’s an extraordinary joy to discover one that is as well-executed and personally moving as Over the Wall by Peter Wartman.

What first caught my eye was the unique worldbuilding—especially his mash-up of pre-Columbian Mesoamerican and south-east Asian styles of architecture that feels both supernatural and solidly grounded in reality. But what drew me into the rest of the book was his solid, simple manner of storytelling: a girl is looking for her lost brother, so lost that he’s even lost his name, and she’s willing to face the demons of an abandoned city to bring him home.

Wartman has gone on to pen a sequel, Stonebreaker, and to draw several issues in the Avatar: The Last Airbender series of comics. He’s a great illustrator, and I wish him many further successes!

Squire, by Sara Alfageeh and Nadia Shammas

We’re always on the lookout for stories with an epic flare to them. So when Megan showed me the cover of Squire, it caught my attention immediately. Opening this graphic novel did not disappoint: it’s the story of Aiza, a daughter of a conquered nation given the opportunity to fulfill her dreams of adventure—as well as to gain the privileges of citizenship—by training to become a squire in the imperial army. Throughout her training, she pushes herself harder than she thought possible, makes unexpected friends (and enemies), and faces challenges both personal and political.

It’s set in a fictional world, but one highly evocative of the medieval Levant. It captures the atmosphere of all the empires that have occupied that territory without burdening the story with the complications of real-world history. Instead, it establishes a diverse set of cultural dynamics within its own setting, setting the military hierarchy of knights, squires, and footsoldiers in tension with the conflict between the various ethnic groups within the military, and exploring the role of that military within the larger empire. Aiza navigates this tricky terrain, ultimately setting her own course toward honor, virtue, and justice.

The artwork captures the personality of both the characters and the setting, with gorgeous landscapes, expressive faces, and thrilling action. I liked where it left Aiza at the end, but there’s room for more of her story, so I hope it might lead to a sequel someday!

–Robert

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This week was a fun exercise, partly because I had just watched the episode of Lego Masters (the U.S. version) in which they had to build movie scenes. A couple of the teams received the advice to keep their stories simple and clear, not to get too complex or ambitious. I decided to take this advice to heart for myself.

It helped that the prompts were simple:

  • Character: Historian
  • Object: Ant hill
  • Genre/Tone: Thriller

That meant simple motivations, straightforward action, and direct opposition.

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I need to start this week with a content warning: the genre prompt was horror/romance, neither of which I’m all that comfortable with, and I was surprised at the places my mind went under the pressure of the exercise. So, the following story contains obsession and stalker behavior, as well as themes of captivity and objectification of people.

As I said, I’m not sure what all this says about the way my mind works; but I suppose I’d like to emphasize that these are things that creep me out, that horrify me, not things that I find romantic.

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Practice is supposed to make perfect, right? Well, at least it points out the areas where I need improvement. This week’s prompts were:

  • Character: Spy
  • Object: Electrical Outlet
  • Genre/Tone: Comedy

I don’t think I nailed either the spy or the comedy aspect of the story, and (though I was clearly heading that direction from the beginning) I never quite made it to the object, the electrical outlet. Still, the fact that it’s readable shows how robust this exercise is at structuring a complete story.

As always, we’d love it if you also tried the exercise with these prompts! If you do, please post your story in the comments. We’re moderating comments, because most of what we currently get is spam. But once your first comment is approved, you’ll be approved on an ongoing basis.

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Image by Christopher John SSF

This week’s prompts were:

  • Character: Librarian
  • Object: Rug
  • Genre/Tone: Speculative (SF/F)

I found it impossible to avoid the trope of the flying carpet. It made me wonder about images that are so deeply ingrained in our cultural imagination that they are utterly inescapable. So now I’m motivated to figure out how to make a magical carpet that doesn’t fly. What other magical properties might a carpet have?

On the other hand, I also found it impossible to name a librarian anything other than Marion, even if I genderbent him. I’m not exploring that at all.

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