First books are hard. You’re figuring out everything on your own, your only help usually being other unpublished writers and/or readers untrained in the editorial arts. First graphic novels are even harder, because not only do you have to figure out the story elements, you also have to master the craft of visual, sequential storytelling.

So a first graphic novel by a solo writer/artist is a herculean labor, and for that reason it’s an extraordinary joy to discover one that is as well-executed and personally moving as Over the Wall by Peter Wartman.

What first caught my eye was the unique worldbuilding—especially his mash-up of pre-Columbian Mesoamerican and south-east Asian styles of architecture that feels both supernatural and solidly grounded in reality. But what drew me into the rest of the book was his solid, simple manner of storytelling: a girl is looking for her lost brother, so lost that he’s even lost his name, and she’s willing to face the demons of an abandoned city to bring him home.

Wartman has gone on to pen a sequel, Stonebreaker, and to draw several issues in the Avatar: The Last Airbender series of comics. He’s a great illustrator, and I wish him many further successes!

Squire, by Sara Alfageeh and Nadia Shammas

We’re always on the lookout for stories with an epic flare to them. So when Megan showed me the cover of Squire, it caught my attention immediately. Opening this graphic novel did not disappoint: it’s the story of Aiza, a daughter of a conquered nation given the opportunity to fulfill her dreams of adventure—as well as to gain the privileges of citizenship—by training to become a squire in the imperial army. Throughout her training, she pushes herself harder than she thought possible, makes unexpected friends (and enemies), and faces challenges both personal and political.

It’s set in a fictional world, but one highly evocative of the medieval Levant. It captures the atmosphere of all the empires that have occupied that territory without burdening the story with the complications of real-world history. Instead, it establishes a diverse set of cultural dynamics within its own setting, setting the military hierarchy of knights, squires, and footsoldiers in tension with the conflict between the various ethnic groups within the military, and exploring the role of that military within the larger empire. Aiza navigates this tricky terrain, ultimately setting her own course toward honor, virtue, and justice.

The artwork captures the personality of both the characters and the setting, with gorgeous landscapes, expressive faces, and thrilling action. I liked where it left Aiza at the end, but there’s room for more of her story, so I hope it might lead to a sequel someday!

–Robert

Llama
“You talkin’ to me?” Image by louiscrusoe

This week truly brought the “random” out of our random prompt generators:

  • Character: Llama rancher
  • Object: Deck of cards
  • Genre/Tone: Mystery/Fantasy

So, I’m really not sure what to make of this story myself. I’ll just say, Megan and I are thinking of making T-shirts that say, “All the llamas knew better than to engage in fortune telling or necromancy of any kind.”

If you feel like following this writing exercise yourself, feel free! Let us know what you come up with by posting the story (or a link to it) in the comments! And till then, well, keep focused on the present.


Ezekiel moseyed over to where her ranching partner Gerey was leaning on the twisted wood-and-vine fence that enclosed the small llama pen. She brushed the loose fleece from her vest and dungarees and coughed the musk of the llamas out of her lungs as she approached.

Continue reading “Friday Freewriting – September 10, 2021 – Robert”
Condiments
Family photo by Steve Snodgrass

We almost wrote a “Thriller” this week, but that seemed too close to the “Action” of last week, so we pulled a new genre from the random generator and came up with the following:

  • Character: Psychologist
  • Object: Ketchup
  • Genre: Speculative (sci-fi/fantasy)

I immediately had an idea that sounded, at least to my mind, like something Megan might do. And because I enjoy her stories so much, I thought I’d give it a go. Humor is not normally my strong suit, so I’m hoping this works half so well as her stories usually do.

In any case, I hope you enjoy this! If you’re enjoying these exercises, feel free to join in yourself, and let us know what you come up with!

Continue reading “Friday Freewriting – September 3, 2021 – Robert”
laboratory
Image by Nicolas Nova

For once, Megan and I wrote stories along very similar lines: we both came up with a heist scenario of sorts, though hers was a “plant something” heist and mine was a “steal something” heist. I suppose that’s not altogether unexpected, given our prompt:

  • Character: Programmer
  • Object: Coat
  • Genre/Tone: Action

Neither of us are fans of explosion-heavy shoot-em-ups, so it makes sense that “Action” would send us both to a heist story.

I also couldn’t resist tossing a little sci-fi element in there. I don’t know why, but I always enjoy a story with a touch of the wondrous in it.

Hope you enjoy our stories this week! Please let us know what works, and what might be improved. And if you wrote anything with this exercise yourself, please share it (or a link to it) in the comments!

Continue reading “Friday Freewriting – August 27, 2021 – Robert”
Lost at Sea
Image by Trevor Pultz

In a form as short as this exercise, usually around five hundred words, it’s often hard to come up with any drama, and it’s easy to go for a punch line. So you’d think with a prompt like:

  • Character: Fisherman
  • Object: Scarf
  • Genre/Tone: Historical Comedy

it would be easy to find the humor. But both Megan and I took “comedy” in the historical sense of “having a happy ending” but not necessarily having a lot of jokes.

I think both our stories have some potential for further development. But the thing I particularly learned from today’s exercise was that drama really does arise from making a character take action. I was tempted at almost every sentence to make Bakala a passive character, but I’ve been working on making sure my characters are always doing something, and that those actions have consequences – at least, I hope it’s clear that the consequences follow his actions. I realize I didn’t exactly connect all the dots.

Continue reading “Friday Freewriting – August 20, 2021 – Robert”
video by Evan Cooper

Well, we’re going to need some content warnings this week. With a prompt like this, what would you expect?

  • Character: Monk
  • Object: Candy
  • Genre/Tone: Horror

To tell the truth, I’m not a fan of gore or slasher-movie horror. I’m more into the creepy existential and cosmic horror that Lovecraft made popular and that’s carried on today in books like T. Kingfisher’s The Hollow Places. But when you have a timed exercise, you sometimes surprise yourself with what comes out, and what came out of me was… the violent destruction of a human body. If that kind of thing triggers you, please check out Megan’s less gory and more creepy story based on the same prompts.

Continue reading “Friday Freewriting – August 6, 2021 – Robert”
Lute
Image by Princess Ruto

Our prompts this week were:

  • Character: Politician
  • Object: Lute
  • Genre/Tone: Saga

As has happened before, I completely forgot one of the elements, in this case the lute. For some reason, my brain has trouble holding the entire prompt at once, and this time I fixated on a politician in a saga, and a lute – which would have been easy to include if I’d only remembered it – simply failed to appear.

Oh well, it’s only an exercise. But one of the points of an exercise is to recognize patterns in what you’re doing, both good and bad. So it’s good to notice my bad habit of ignoring part of the prompt. It means I need to (1) pay more attention in the future, maybe referring back to the prompts as a checklist; and (2) that I might do well to seek out simpler story prompts, and/or to give myself more room and time to develop stories.

On the plus side, I think I did a pretty decent job on the tone of the piece. I’m not sure how appealing it is to a modern audience (let me know in the comments!) but it has a few of the more obvious hallmarks of Icelandic sagas.

Continue reading “Friday Freewriting – July 30, 2021 – Robert”
Warehouse
Image by Paul Sableman

This week’s prompts were fun:

  • Character: Werewolf
  • Object: Packing tape
  • Genre/Tone: Satire

The plot for this one came pretty quickly to me, but as soon as I started writing it sprawled out of control with too many characters and not enough theme to hold them all together. Also, I’m not sure a single Beatles pun counts as “satire”. But it was exciting as I wrote, trying to cram everything I was thinking into words on the page. It just needs a lot of work before it’s properly readable. That’s how first drafts usually work: there’s something good or fun in it, but it takes work to communicate that to the reader.

If you want to try your hand at this exercise, please link or post your version in the comments below!

Continue reading “Friday Freewriting – July 23, 2021 – Robert”

We weren’t able to post anything last week, and this week we both took significantly more than the allotted time to complete this exercise. Rationally, we know that nobody’s hurt by this and everything is okay, but it still feels like failure. It feels like one of the try-fail cycles that the exercise talks about. But I’m trying to think of them, not so much as try-fail cycles, as try-learn cycles.

Image by Dantheman9758

For example, I’ve learned the differences between a mammoth and a mastodon. I’ve also learned that research takes time away from writing.

In fact, the prompts were not that difficult:

  • Character: Skier
  • Object: Bowl
  • Genre/Tone: Historical.

Moreover, I’m actually kinda satisfied with the story that resulted; it needs a lot of work, but it’s basically coherent and even has a couple exciting moments. I might use it as an exercise in editing sometime. I really liked Megan’s dark survival story, too, and I liked that we both took “bowl” in poetic rather than literal directions. So in the end, I’m happy to have plenty to learn from in this week’s writing.

I hope you’re learning things from this, too, and even more from your own writing. If you’re joining us in these (or any other exercises), feel free to share or link in the comments!

Continue reading “Friday Freewriting – July 16, 2021 – Robert”